Period 3 - Year 12 Film - Block A
Objective: To apply an essay structure when answering essay questions.
Tips on essay writing based on the essay your wrote - 'Eduqas examiner's report Summer 2019'.
Essay feedback : -
Compare how far your chosen films reflect their different production contexts.
- Make sure your comparisons are even.
- Don't use the same download of information. Do your own background research.
- Longer responses gave more evidence (therefore greater marks were awarded). The examiners is looking for detail and depth of knowledge.
- Auteur theory not enough to provide a checklist, you need to have a deeper understanding, 'blonde women'. Stereotype of dumb blonde women a are weaker less intelligent. (patriarchal society, post war representation)
- You need to show how the studio was restricted by the Hays Code, compared to Independent production companies.
- Auteur theory needs to be included such as Bazin, Cahiers, Kael, Sarris).
- Directors working against the system - auteur response.
- Study production process of the films in details and auteur signatures: What they look like + why they included what they did, what was their style?
- Weaker responses simply stated that the films were different or the same.
- Outstanding responses discussed the cinematic comparison of cinematography and editing. i.e. 'Some Like It Hot' influenced by classical style - Bonny & Clyde were influenced by the French New Wave.
- Similarly, there were some very exciting comparisons of how particular cultural and political events had influenced anti authoritarian figures in Apocalypse Now. (Personified in Rick and Willard)
- Weaker responses were sweeping generalization of those time periods.
- Don't confuse the times they were made with the times they were set.
- There were some excellent responses on Vertigo and Some Like It Hot that showed how modern some aspects of these films are and how unusual they are, in many respects, for the Classical period. Likewise, there were some good responses that discussed whether gender representations in films like Apocalypse Now and One Flew Over The Cuckoo’s Nest reflected a supposedly post-Feminist America.
- Some responses chose to examine a particular aspect of the films to compare such as cinematic style, and related this to contextual pressures.
- Some candidates confused “the times they were made” with the times in which the narratives are set. This was particularly noticeable with Some Like It Hot and Bonnie and Clyde, in some instances candidates thought that Apocalypse Now had been made during the Vietnam War, which led to much confused writing.
- http://www.screenonline.org.uk/film/id/592022/ - The Hays Code and impact on studios - Censorship
Mock exam breakdown
Example of a mock exam
What are the key areas to discuss in the question? How do we go about answering a question like this?
Essay writing techniques - The perfect paragraph
Example of a mock exam
What are the key areas to discuss in the question? How do we go about answering a question like this?
PEETTIL+C
Point
Evidence
Explain
Terminology
Theory
Impact
Link back to question
Question : Compare how masculinity in your chosen films reflects the contexts in which they were made. Refer to particular sequences within your response. (40)
Let's create a perfect paragraph as a class together and then you can continue your comparison thereafter and then you can swap it and mark it, against the mark scheme on the links below:
Mark your partners work constructively, what were they particularly good at and what were they missing?
Period 6 - Year 12 Film - Block E
Objective: To apply an essay structure when answering essay questions.
Tips on essay writing based on the essay your wrote - 'Eduqas examiner's report Summer 2019'.
Essay feedback : -
Compare how far your chosen films reflect their different production contexts.
- Make sure your comparisons are even.
- Don't use the same download of information. Do your own background research.
- Longer responses gave more evidence (therefore greater marks were awarded). The examiners is looking for detail and depth of knowledge.
- Auteur theory not enough to provide a checklist, you need to have a deeper understanding, 'blonde women'. Stereotype of dumb blonde women a are weaker less intelligent. (patriarchal society, post war representation)
- You need to show how the studio was restricted by the Hays Code, compared to Independent production companies.
- Auteur theory needs to be included such as Bazin, Cahiers, Kael, Sarris).
- Directors working against the system - auteur response.
- Study production process of the films in details and auteur signatures: What they look like + why they included what they did, what was their style?
- Weaker responses simply stated that the films were different or the same.
- Outstanding responses discussed the cinematic comparison of cinematography and editing. i.e. 'Some Like It Hot' influenced by classical style - Bonny &Clyde were influenced by the French New Wave.
- Similarly, there were some very exciting comparisons of how particular cultural and political events had influenced anti authoritarian figures in Apocalypse Now. (Personified in Rick and Willard)
- Weaker responses were sweeping generalization of those time periods.
- Don't confuse the times they were made with the times they were set.
- There were some excellent responses on Vertigo and Some Like It Hot that showed how modern some aspects of these films are and how unusual they are, in many respects, for the Classical period. Likewise, there were some good responses that discussed whether gender representations in films like Apocalypse Now and One Flew Over The Cuckoo’s Nest reflected a supposedly post-Feminist America.
- Some responses chose to examine a particular aspect of the films to compare such as cinematic style, and related this to contextual pressures.
- Some candidates confused “the times they were made” with the times in which the narratives are set. This was particularly noticeable with Some Like It Hot and Bonnie and Clyde, in some instances candidates thought that Apocalypse Now had been made during the Vietnam War, which led to much confused writing.
- http://www.screenonline.org.uk/film/id/592022/ - The Hays Code and impact on studios - Censorship
Mock exam breakdown
Essay writing techniques - The perfect paragraph
PEETTIL+C
Point
Evidence
Explain
Terminology
Theory
Impact
Link back to question
Question : Compare how masculinity in your chosen films reflects the contexts in which they were made. Refer to particular sequences within your response. (40)
Let's create a perfect paragraph as a class together and then you can continue your comparison thereafter and then you can swap it and mark it, against the mark scheme on the links below:
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